Personal Essay

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1) One idea that the writer gave was to be sure you write about something you feel very strongly and passionate about.

2) One idea the writer gave I could remember is to be specific and avoid using abstract expressions and phrases.

3)
a. Don't include any extra facts, there shouldn't be more facts than opinions.
b. Make connections between the reader and the story. Include how the story can relate to them.
c. Keep it personal while also relating it to a wider world.

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